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Alone by ~xsilver82:iconxsilver82:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed




As I sit here thing of what happened ,
I feel so a alone in this world,

I bet you don’t know how it feel to be alone in this world,
Which you live in,
Feel the pain I feel,

To feel the pain of losing,
A love one in front of your own eye’s,
The hurt of it that feeling deep inside your heat,
Divided you in two 2 people die in to give out to be reborn,
The fear of that would kill my mind,
Such dark side of me giving out would,
Eat me up and killing what thought I have left,
In this place I feel alone.
©2005-2009 ~xsilver82
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Submitted: April 14, 2005
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I can't think of any thing to say


(I am very sad to said this I am losing my mind big time and because there no one there for me this now I feel now for the last 5 week 14/02/2006)
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~DarkWingDucky:iconDarkWingDucky: Apr 14, 2005, 7:05:56 AM
what happened to your idea of writing happier work

:hug: not that i'm complaining :)

it's beautiful - i really like this one - alone (punning - me by my self like it...never mind)
~xsilver82:iconxsilver82: Apr 14, 2005, 7:21:13 AM
I will writing happier work when some thing come to me but for now i am a bit lost :hug

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wow am still alive some how
~DarkWingDucky:iconDarkWingDucky: Apr 14, 2005, 7:42:28 AM
i'm so sorry to hear that

if i find you i'll be sure to let you know okay :)

:hug:
~xsilver82:iconxsilver82: Apr 14, 2005, 8:17:32 AM
plz do :hug:

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wow am still alive some how
~DarkWingDucky:iconDarkWingDucky: Apr 14, 2005, 8:22:01 AM
search is on...:)

we will discover you some where...
~xsilver82:iconxsilver82: Apr 14, 2005, 8:22:51 AM
:thanks:

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wow am still alive some how
~lostandloveless:iconlostandloveless: Apr 14, 2005, 8:56:48 PM
Good one. Sometimes the best material isn't always the happiest. Nice work. :hug:

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~artash:iconartash: Apr 15, 2005, 3:34:38 AM
hey thats really good i would never have thought that you would be writen poetry mr. but im glad you do. i hope you cheer up ans remember i mite not be working with you anymore but i will still be around to see you and have to go the chris's course and english so ill still be around alot just not working he he woohoo

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sticks and stones may brake my bones but whips and chains exsite me so tie me up and beat me down and show me that u lik me :licking::blowkiss::ohmygod::sadangel::innocent:
~xsilver82:iconxsilver82: Apr 15, 2005, 5:18:29 AM
thank you for that :hug: but i do hope we can still hang about some time in the town :hug:

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wow am still alive some how
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